NEED HELP with verses and bridge!!!! BREAK FREE

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Permalink Reply by All Write on January 7, 2009 at 1:36pm

I like this joint. It has a great concept, flow, and melody.

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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on January 7, 2009 at 2:17pm

Thanks Maurice! I sound like I'm shivering... horrible, right?

But yeah... I need some help with that song.

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Permalink Reply by angel on January 8, 2009 at 3:13pm

it cant be locked up
trapped in the boxes of judgment
ill kick out of these contraints
of society
noone is gonna deny me

ill break free just to know you
break free just to show u

you captured my passion
threw me across the bridge
the side that knows no restriction
unchained and all of me intact
u are my benediction


whatever i have to do, ill do
for you are all i see
movin my way through
weak heartless
walls
im gonna be there to
catch all your falls

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Permalink Reply by angel on January 8, 2009 at 3:16pm

girl i could not open this stuff but i was just inspired to lay somethun down
i tried to follow your cadence but without the track to play, well?

cool concept and lyrics.

peace and blessings

xxaxx

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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on January 8, 2009 at 3:30pm

You're like a renaissance writer! I love it!!! We have to collab... would love to work on a girl band project!

angel said:

it cant be locked up
trapped in the boxes of judgment
ill kick out of these contraints
of society
noone is gonna deny me

ill break free just to know you
break free just to show u

you captured my passion
threw me across the bridge
the side that knows no restriction
unchained and all of me intact
u are my benediction


whatever i have to do, ill do
for you are all i see
movin my way through
weak heartless
walls
im gonna be there to
catch all your falls

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Permalink Reply by angel on January 8, 2009 at 4:02pm

that is my dream...a new renaissance girl band in fact lets call them" new renaissance"

i see the wardrobe already!!!!!!!!!new opulence and cutting edge.
made a few typos up there its "constraints" but maybe you got it
and i need to delete a few words that are useless..but hey thank you
for getting my passion for writing. it means sooo much!

big love

angel

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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on January 8, 2009 at 4:21pm

I love it because your initial take on it wasn't about love... you immediately went to oppresion!!!! I like unordinary writers... lol... brings balance to things.


angel said:

that is my dream...a new renaissance girl band in fact lets call them" new renaissance"

i see the wardrobe already!!!!!!!!!new opulence and cutting edge.
made a few typos up there its "constraints" but maybe you got it
and i need to delete a few words that are useless..but hey thank you
for getting my passion for writing. it means sooo much!

big love

angel

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Permalink Reply by angel on January 8, 2009 at 7:18pm

people feel when people have the rare gift of true no holds barred romantic love,
these lyrics are about LOVE and the oppression society has around it they try to label
it and put it into a box, like r and j, also jealousy sabottages relationships all the time friends family
seek and destroy lovers all the time...but at the core its all about real romantic love that you would die for!

ALICIA S. SMITH said:

I love it because your initial take on it wasn't about love... you immediately went to oppresion!!!! I like unordinary writers... lol... brings balance to things.


angel said:

that is my dream...a new renaissance girl band in fact lets call them" new renaissance"

i see the wardrobe already!!!!!!!!!new opulence and cutting edge.
made a few typos up there its "constraints" but maybe you got it
and i need to delete a few words that are useless..but hey thank you
for getting my passion for writing. it means sooo much!

big love

angel

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