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"Autograph" Collab
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Alicia's here... let's see... I already have the hook and the first two verses... depending on how the track goes... might need some pre-hooks, bridges, another verse... we'll see
Guys... this is a very SEXY, Sassy, Fun, Flirty, Witty, song.... keep that in mind.. THINK... Applonia, Vanity, Fergie, Gwen Stefani, Kelis... it's on that vibe.
lyrics are...
V1
I'm the type of girl
Who likes to take your eyes
And put em' in my pocket
I'm the type of girl
Who likes to take your mind
And wear Heels when I walk right through it
I'm an idol, and this is my title
So walk away, from my stage
Cause you will never be me
The worlds a show
And I'm the headliner
The curtains drawn
The roses thrown
And now it's time for me to go on
Hook
Pull out the film, pull out the crew
My life is breaking news
Everybody wanna walk in my shoes
Everybody tryna do what I do
Pull out the pen, pull out the pad
Everybody wanna autograph
They wanna see me, not just on the TV
They want want to see see
They want want to touch touch
They want want to feel cause they love me so much
Pull out the pen, pull out the pad everybody wanna autograph
They want to see me, not just on the TV
V2
I'm the type of girl
Who wears her hair in curls
and let's it down so it can flow when the wind blows
And I'm the type of girl
Who hates her hair in curls, and cuts it off just cause I'm feeling so so
SO What if I tend to contradict, everybody love me they want to be my friend
And what if I, am different
It's who I am and when they don't understand I tell them to
Alicia's here... let's see... I already have the hook and the first two verses... depending on how the track goes... might need some pre-hooks, bridges, another verse... we'll see
Guys... this is a very SEXY, Sassy, Fun, Flirty, Witty, song.... keep that in mind.. THINK... Applonia, Vanity, Fergie, Gwen Stefani, Kelis... it's on that vibe.
lyrics are...
V1
I'm the type of girl
Who likes to take your eyes
And put em' in my pocket
I'm the type of girl
Who likes to take your mind
And wear Heels when I walk right through it
I'm an idol, and this is my title
So walk away, from my stage
Cause you will never be me
The worlds a show
And I'm the headliner
The curtains drawn
The roses thrown
And now it's time for me to go on
Hook
Pull out the film, pull out the crew
My life is breaking news
Everybody wanna walk in my shoes
Everybody tryna do what I do
Pull out the pen, pull out the pad
Everybody wanna autograph
They wanna see me, not just on the TV
They want want to see see
They want want to touch touch
They want want to feel cause they love me so much
Pull out the pen, pull out the pad everybody wanna autograph
They want to see me, not just on the TV
V2
I'm the type of girl
Who wears her hair in curls
and let's it down so it can flow when the wind blows
And I'm the type of girl
Who hates her hair in curls, and cuts it off just cause I'm feeling so so
SO What if I tend to contradict, everybody love me they want to be my friend
And what if I, am different
It's who I am and when they don't understand I tell them to
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Replies to This Discussion
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Permalink Reply by Robyn Z. on -
Ok Nate, going to your page now..Let me go listen and come back and look at the text
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Permalink Reply by Robyn Z. on
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Ok..Alicia and Nate, The song is Fire...and so are your lyrics Alicia, Alicia I think wth this particular track and the way it is going to need to be delivered some of the lyrics may need to be scratched but I am not going to know until I hear the melody of how it is going to go .. I need the track...I hear the Hook and this track needs to go all the way, especially when the hook explodes so I am going to go ahead and write a hook...Also, Yes Nate it is too wordy.
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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on -
Yeah... it is too verbose for the track that you did... it was cool with the original track. But I can't see these words working with this track... it has to be editted down...
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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on
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I LOVE WHAT U DID FOR THE HOOK
How about this for the hook
Pull out the film pull out the crew My life is breaking news
Everybody wanna walk in my shoes Everybody tryna do what I do
Pull out the pen pull out the pad Everybody wanna autograph
They wanna see me, not just on the TV
They wanna see me, they wanna touch me, they wanna feel me, They really love me
Pull out the pen, pull out the pad everybody wanna autograph
They want to see me, not just on the TV
(bONE tHUGS VIBE... I'll post the melody when I get home)... I know that it still looks like a lot... but I took some words out... lol
Nate Productions said:I feel you on dat Robyn..Also this is just the idea so I can re-arrange if needed. -
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Permalink Reply by Robyn Z. on
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I Love what both of you have done and this can be done...Alicia, I am sure on the original track it was flowing with all of the words...This Song that Nate has a completely different flow and I can hear and see it...no worries family, we can do this and it will be amazing.
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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on
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Yes Robyn... Amazing is what we can do! Let's make it happen
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Permalink Reply by angel on -
wow nice teamwork...this will be a hot process to observe bringing two different takes on the same subject a male and female perspective and the artist who will sing to it!!! AMAZINGLY CREATIVE VIBES HERE...FEELS LIKE WE CAN ALL LEARN ABOUT BRINGING DIFFERENT TALENT AND ASPECTS OF A CONCEPT TOGETHER TP SEE WHAT MAGIC CAN HAPPEN.
please post all versions and tracks to the page...
may the jkswa gods be with you!
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Permalink Reply by Robyn Z. on
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got it..i am on MSN
Nate Productions said:I have a rough melody..but it needs alot of editing n work but Robyn add me on msn so I can pass it over..Lets do amazing! -
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Permalink Reply by ALICIA S. SMITH on
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Robyn... add me on urs.... asaccs@hotmail.com
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