this is my first time putting some lyrics here, so please be gentle, hihi
these are some things i wrote, without any melody ...
FOR THE FIRST TIME
VERSE 1
Allow me to keep some distance
I need that piece
It`s your second crime
Sealed by the phone
Ten minutes later
I`m in the middle of the glass
It`s dangerous enough
I`m covered with everything I`m tierd of
Breathing is hard
and crying is easy
To miss the piece of heaven
Could that lead me to you
Waiting for mountains to speak
Beneath the sky of happiness i`m invisible
Sometimes the stars are my only way out
It`s crystal clean
But this heart is broken
CHORUS
It felt like you found me
For the first time it`s not about me
First time for me to see the night
First pain I`m missing
First love I`m calling for
First day of my lonely life
First time you`re not here
VERSE 2
You know i`m not gonna find the way
It`s not what i feel
It`s what I believe in
What is that
Cause ones I believed in you and me
And now that dream is no longer here
We vanished as we said we won`t
Remember?
To read between sorry and hope
I still don`t know where we stand
It`s been scary for me
to get close to you
So many times I wanted you
to touch my body
To feel my lips
But in my prospective
you never felt me
as i felt you
What is your chance
Are you better without me
May I be excused and leave this game
But I`m here
So stady
Can`t you see
CHORUS
It felt like you found me
For the first time it`s not about me
First time for me to see the night
First pain I`m missing
First love I`m calling for
First day of my lonely life
First time you`re not here
BRIDGE
You made me mad
I forget
You felt that
I found it
I`m buliding my dreams again
So much beauty in this picture
Just remember
you are forever my glow in the dark
CHORUS
It felt like you found me
For the first time it`s not about me
First time for me to see the night
First pain I`m missing
First love I`m calling for
First day of my lonely life
First time you`re not here
i think its pretty good.. i always write to no beat in my mind lol...yOUR VERSES ARE LONG I THINK VERSE ONE COULD ACTUALLY BE BROKEN UP INTO 1 & 2 MAYBE 3 EVEN THEN HAVE A PRE THEN CHROUS THEN OTHER VERSES CHROUS ETC./... THEY SAY TO GET TO THE HOOK WITHIN THE FIRST MINUTE OF THE SONG.... ACTUALLY THE SAYING GOES I BELIEVE// DON'T BORE US GET TO THE CHROUS.... SO WITH THAT IN MIND (NOT THAT YOUR SONG IS BORING, THATS JUST A SAYING I HEARD) try singing your lyrics and time it... but i think the verses could be cut into more verse.... i am no expert tho///
oops... caps where on sorry,.,,,