Italian Princess.. ANY COMMENTS?

THIS GUY ASKED ME TO WRITE A LYRIC ABOUT HIS PAST LIFE WITH THIS CHIC FROM ITALY.. SHE WAS HANGING OUT WITH THE WRONG CROWD, SOME ORGANIZED CRIME AND SO HE HAD TO SPLIT.. HE LUVED HER BUT HE HAD TO GET OUT CAUSE SHE WAS GETTING TO DEEP... LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK.. ITS A ROUGH DRAFT BUT I WROTE IT IN BOUT HALF HR.... NOT TO BAD I GUES...

I wanted to make it work girl,
but you was stepping into thangs too deep
It was becoming to heavy for me
with the type of company you keep

I didnt want to walk away from you,
cause i loved you so damm much.
But i knew it was it best to leave then
cause I couldn’t stay and be your crutch

I tried to pursway you, to leave that life behind
to come with me when I go and start a new life

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I loved you ,...my italian princess.
I needed you and you needed me too.
I loved you my iItalian princess
but I just could be with you

I wanted to, ...Ohh to spend our life together
But there was just to much resistance
I fell for you hard,
my italian princess

Altho I havent seen you in awhile,
girl, i s still think bout you.
We had so many sweet nights alone
under the bright bright moon

I seen the world with you,
we shared so many things.
That’s why it still hurts so bad
and I can’t work thru my feelings

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I loved you ,...my italian princess.
I needed you and you needed me too.
I loved you my iItalian princess
but I just could be with you

I wanted to, ...Ohh to spend our life together
But there was just to much resistance
I fell for you hard,
my italian princess

Our time together was always uncertain,
Always having to watch what we say.
I wanted to live a free life with you
but you couldn’t, so I had to walk away

But know I did it cause i loved you so ,
and I couldnt live taken those chances.
If things went wrong even one time
the hurt would be to hard of an impact

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I loved you ,...my italian princess.
I needed you and you needed me too.
I loved you my iItalian princess
but I just could be with you

I wanted to, ...Ohh to spend our life together
But there was just to much resistance
I fell for you hard,
my italian princess

Kicker
You know I think bout you still
and it lays on my conscious
I just wish things could of been different
I love you, my italian princess