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Hey,here a song unfinished that I wrote a little hour ago.Don’t be hard with me because it’s my first draft of a first song that I wrote,but be correct & tell me what you think ! :)
Here is the Chorus,may call the song “That’s what love is ! :)

But I,I need you To be here with me
To Say that you love me
So hug me this time
I want you to be mine
We’re here each other
Sitting side by side
Like brother and sister
But I know our feelings can’t be hide
And I know that’s what love is …

Could you help me finish the song ! :)
send me a mail at miaalewis@yahoo.com

Toddles !
xoxo
M

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