50 Ways...Take 3

Hey Everyone!

Here is my proposed hook for the "50 Ways" song...I am looking forward to feedback.

I also, freestyled a lil bit and came up with a possible 2nd verse...so let me know :-)

Thanks,

Leia


HOOK:

You can’t deny my love
Cause it was made for you
And all I’m asking for
Is more from you

Your love is lacking one-hundred from you
Cause for the 50 ways you did
Another 50 counts for what you didn’t do



POSSIBLE 2nd VERSE:

Usually I, don’t wanna say good bye

To your love baby

Cause your all I know and wanna be with

I'm hoping for the best...hope I pass the test

I wanna pay attention to every word you say

I wanna pay attention to every move you make

But what I don’t do, seems to matter to you

The most, and I’m trying girl to give it my all…